Ten
years after college, three very different women reunite for a summer on
Martha’s Vineyard. As they come to grips with various challenges in their
lives, an encounter with a reclusive fisherman threatens to change everything
they believe about their world—and each other.
Excerpt:
Chapter
21
Climbing
up the dune, she stumbled from little avalanches of sand that slipped beneath
her feet. The boy caught her and pulled her up. His hand was smooth and warm
and young. It felt good to her to hold a boy’s hand again.
At
the top of the dune, the salt air swept over and around her face and hair. The
ocean was shimmering, limitless. There was nothing around them but the sea and
the wind and the sand—which is why she had come to this, her new favorite place
on the Vineyard. Only today she was going to have to share it with a gangly
skinflint of a boy who stood there still grinning at her, the wind tossing a
lone, blond cowlick back and forth on top of his head like a bobble-head doll.
Perhaps
he expected another kiss. She assured herself he wouldn’t be getting one. After
all, she had grown better at restraining her impulses in the two months since
that first ferry ride.
“I
thought you’d be married and off on your honeymoon by now,” Charlotte said,
glad finally to be back on offense after nearly rolling down the dune.
She
made a point of not looking at him. Teenage boys with racehorse metabolisms and
zero body fat were very fond of not wearing shirts, and while the cheerleading
squad down the beach probably found that exciting, Charlotte thought it was
important that she not appear to agree.
She
kept looking out to sea as she spoke, as if the water were far more interesting
than the boy or what he might have to say, which in truth it was not. When the
silence became awkward, she turned to see if he were even paying attention. He
was staring off at the horizon. She followed his gaze.
“Long
story,” he said, finally.
In
the pause that followed, it became clear that the story, long or short, was not
likely to be told. Charlotte sensed a wound that was something more than
shyness. It provoked an unwanted and involuntary surge of maternalism in her.
“I’m
Charlotte,” she said, extending her hand. “I’ve been told I’m a good listener
to long stories.”
The
boy looked at her and took her hand for the second time. He did not complete
the introduction but simply held her hand in his. He wasn’t coy; it just didn’t
occur to him that his name was at all important to her.
In
his bare feet he was not as tall as she remembered, and he seemed younger. He
wasn’t a child, but he couldn’t have been older than twenty-two, if that.
Separated from the rough girl who had been hanging on him on the ferry, he
looked less like a greaser and more like a California surfer. The difference
somehow mattered to Charlotte. It felt weird that it mattered.
She
hadn’t intended to be his company, nor had she asked him for his, but the top
of the dune was not wide. When she wandered away the few feet it allowed and
spread her blanket, he followed and sat beside her. He offered a half-empty
bottle of spiced rum she hadn’t noticed he had been dangling from his left
hand. She didn’t usually drink that early in the morning—or to be more precise,
she never did—but somehow she sensed this wasn’t the time or the place to
accentuate the differences in their ages and manners. She wanted to hear his
story, and she wanted him to feel free to tell it.
Still,
he said nothing. Instead, he sat next to her and peered out at the sea as if
they were an old married couple, silent and content merely to have each other’s
company.
The
voices of the others rose and fell periodically on the air, coming from fifty
yards away in the direction of skiff down the beach. That the boy’s friends
didn’t seem in a hurry to join him suggested that they, too, knew he needed
some space. Charlotte could hear them laughing and groaning and grunting,
trying to pry the keel of their boat out of the sand with the help of the tide
that slowly rose around it.
She
leaned back on the towel and continued to follow the boy’s gaze out to sea. He
had an odd intensity about him, as if he were expecting something was about to
happen out there—a missile launch or mermaid eruption or something. On the
third pass of the rum, he turned to look at her.
“We
were supposed to be having a baby,” he said.
“We?”
“The
girl and me—the one you saw on the ferry.”
"And
. . .?”
“And
nothing. She lied to me. I heard about it from one of her girlfriends who
called me from back home. Said she couldn’t keep quiet anymore. That she felt
it was wrong. She said my girlfriend wasn’t pregnant—never had been. She just
made that up to get me to take her away from her old man. Not that I can blame
her. He used to beat her . . .”
Charlotte
had not forgotten the girl’s blistering right hook, and now she realized where
it came from. She must have given the old man as good as she got.
“
. . . but it was a damned lie just the same.”
Charlotte
said nothing, which didn’t seem to faze him. “A damned lie,” he said again,
looking back toward the sea.
“Is
that why you were getting married?”
“She
must have thought so, but I would have married her anyway—baby or no baby.”
“And
so now you’re not—getting married, I mean?”
“You
can’t build a marriage on a lie,” he said, looking at her with an expression of
surprise, which she took to mean that he would have guessed someone so much older
would have been a little wiser.
Charlotte
let the proverb hang in the air. It was true enough, in theory, but in reality
her own marriage and, she had come to believe, a great many others—perhaps even
the majority—were rather elaborately built on a foundation of lies. True love
was a myth, as far as she was concerned.
“’Think
about it,’ you said to me, back then,” he continued. “Do you remember?”
“I
do, but I was …” She started to explain her bizarre conduct on the ferry that
she realized, as soon as she began, made no difference to anyone now. He cut
her off.
“Truth
is, apart from wondering why you was such a damn lunatic and where the hell you
had come from, I didn’t need to think about it. In fact, I was pretty excited
about it. That’s what I guess you didn’t know—and how could you. I’m sure I
looked like just a punk to you.”
“Still
do, actually.” She said this to be witty and cute, which it was not, and which
alarmed her, as if her mouth had suddenly detached itself from her brain. She
regretted the words as soon as they were spoken. Another lie told to the poor
boy. He seemed rather Byronesque to her, in fact, and not at all like a punk,
but she didn’t think he would understand why, so she left it.
“I
was excited to be a father,” he continued, indignantly. A tear rolled down. He
was struggling to keep his emotions in check. She had had no idea. She felt
suddenly even more mortified at her glibness a moment ago.
It
was either the best or worst of all possible combinations, depending on the eye
of the beholder. Here was this painfully earnest boy, wounded and still
suffering at the hands of a conniving and thoughtless girlfriend. Here was this
older woman, herself conflicted and out of touch with her own feelings about
love and sex and marriage. Between them was a half-empty bottle of rum, and all
around them was sunshine and the sea.
©
2014 by M. C. Hurley. All rights reserved.
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Author Bio and Links:
Michael
Hurley and his wife Susan live near Charleston, South Carolina. Born and raised
in Baltimore, Michael holds a degree in English from the University of Maryland
and law from St. Louis University.
The
Prodigal, Michael’s debut novel from Ragbagger Press, received the Somerset
Prize for mainstream fiction and numerous accolades in the trade press,
including Publishers Weekly, Kirkus Reviews, ForeWord Reviews, BookTrib,
Chanticleer Reviews, and IndieReader. It is currently in development for a
feature film by producer Diane Sillan Isaacs. Michael’s second novel, The Vineyard,
is due to be released by Ragbagger Press in December 2014.
Michael’s
first book, Letters from the Woods, is a collection of wilderness-themed essays
published by Ragbagger Press in 2005. It
was shortlisted for Book of the Year by ForeWord magazine. In 2009, Michael embarked on a two-year, 2,200
mile solo sailing voyage that ended with the loss of his 32-foot sloop, the
Gypsy Moon, in the Windward Passage between Cuba and Haiti in 2012. That voyage
and the experiences that inspired him to set sail became the subject of his
memoir, Once Upon A Gypsy Moon, published in 2013 by Hachette Book Group.
When
he is not writing, Michael enjoys reading and relaxing with Susan on the porch
of their rambling, one-hundred-year-old house.
His fondest pastimes are ocean sailing, playing piano and classical
guitar, cooking, and keeping up with an energetic Irish terrier, Frodo Baggins.
Great excerpt, I enjoyed it.
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